I have to things that I would change. One is that I would make the voice at the end slower because I missed information the first time I listened to it. My other change would be in the beginning with the high pith voice because I didn't understand what was being said. Besides that your commercial was really good!!
The voices sound like they are getting cut off and the music seems to be changing levels. Even with these small little factors, I thought your commercia was good and it was a good thought with the voices!
oooh 1st comment! I liked the music but I couldn't understand what the high-pitched voice was saying... but good job :)
ReplyDeleteI have to things that I would change. One is that I would make the voice at the end slower because I missed information the first time I listened to it. My other change would be in the beginning with the high pith voice because I didn't understand what was being said. Besides that your commercial was really good!!
ReplyDeletegood job! just watch how fast you talk but i like the music in the backround!
ReplyDeleteGood Job just talked a little to fast.
ReplyDeleteThe voices were a little fast to understand. But the editing was good!
ReplyDeleteThe voices sound like they are getting cut off and the music seems to be changing levels. Even with these small little factors, I thought your commercia was good and it was a good thought with the voices!
ReplyDeleteI like the voices but the end was a little to fast for someone to understand
ReplyDeletei like the alien voice
ReplyDeletehahaa i really liked your commercial! great idea it was very creative. probably one of the best ones. the music was great!
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